Snuffy
01-11-2010, 10:51 AM
Read the title then read the article.
The title leads you to believe the girl was found dead in the house, reading the article tells you she was found alive in the house, but later died in a hosptial.
Just a minor pet peeve of mine.
Girl, Stepfather Found Dead in Miami Home
Sunday, January 10, 2010
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MIAMI — A 9-year-old girl and her stepfather were found dead in their Miami home in what authorities say may have been a murder-suicide.
Miami-Dade police spokesman Javier Baez says officers were called to the home Saturday morning and found a 24-year-old man who had been shot minutes earlier. He led officers to the back of the home when they heard another gunshot.
Police say they found the young man's 55-year-old stepfather, Julian Marin, dead. Also shot was 9-year-old Caroline Camelo, who was taken to a hospital where she later died.
The young man has not yet been identified. He was taken to a hospital and was in critical condition.
Police say Marin was likely the shooter.
The title leads you to believe the girl was found dead in the house, reading the article tells you she was found alive in the house, but later died in a hosptial.
Just a minor pet peeve of mine.
Girl, Stepfather Found Dead in Miami Home
Sunday, January 10, 2010
http://www.foxnews.com/images/service_ap_36.gif
MIAMI — A 9-year-old girl and her stepfather were found dead in their Miami home in what authorities say may have been a murder-suicide.
Miami-Dade police spokesman Javier Baez says officers were called to the home Saturday morning and found a 24-year-old man who had been shot minutes earlier. He led officers to the back of the home when they heard another gunshot.
Police say they found the young man's 55-year-old stepfather, Julian Marin, dead. Also shot was 9-year-old Caroline Camelo, who was taken to a hospital where she later died.
The young man has not yet been identified. He was taken to a hospital and was in critical condition.
Police say Marin was likely the shooter.